Fooxie
Recruit
Fallen but not broken, chained but not tamed, losing but not for long
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Post by Fooxie on Aug 5, 2009 1:58:16 GMT -6
Kairo walked in the forest. She was studding the plant and rock. Her feet were tired and so she took off her boots. She sat on a rock and ran her toes through the grass on the floor of the forest. She picked up her book and drew thing that came to her mind. She drew her home in the Angel realm. She missed her home a little. The only thing she had been able to bring from heaven was her winged wolf named Aaliyah. Aaliyah was sitting next to Kairo with her on Kairo's lap. Kairo gently petted Aaliyah head when she stopped a minute in her drawing to look up. Kairo went back to drawing leaving Aaliyah on watch.
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Post by Dark Delias on Aug 23, 2009 23:51:39 GMT -6
Eherm.... there is a minor mistake I must ask you to re-phrase there, Fooxie.
You state how the only thing you LEFT in heaven was your winged wolf, Aaliyah.... than in the very next line you state how he's right beside you. Rephrase that, please.
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